Adopting a child requires a lot of responsibility as well as economically and education; in addition to making and signing lots of legal papers, the adoption is the only way for a couple who can not have children or who want to adopt one, and in which they could consider the child as theirs. Nevertheless, adopting a kid could last rather time, a lot of money as well as issues of education. Which advantages and disadvantages could the adoption have?
On the hand, most of the countries where people are making a process in adopting a child usually give a well result, and the parents love the kid as theirs; obviously, the infant will love them as any dad with his boy. However, adopting a child who had a bad infancy or was being left in an Orphanage with an early age, has a caring love. The adoption is a fabulous way to introduce children in another life with love and education. On the other hand, the espousal helps people who ca not have children. Lots of the parents are falling in depression and they feel useless for not having one by their own. The advantage is that they feel lonely and want to have a kid for loving him / her.
As I said before, adopting a child requires a lot of money, more if the kid comes from another country like Africa, USA, for instance. The process of papers are higher, and the parents who want to adopt that child at first must go there to visit him / her. Given to the long time of adopting one, most of the daddies, who want a newborn baby, receive him / her when they are between seven or eight months. Obviously, many people say that's not a problem. Moreover, parents could have problem with the child, maybe because he / she is not used to accustom to our surroundings.
In conclusion, if you want to adopt a kid, you must be careful about what you want to do with him / her, because he / she had a bad infancy or was being left in an Orphanage with early age. Try to give a lot of love, because God makes us to loving people no matter who we are.
Really interesting topic.
ResponderEliminarLet me correct a couple of things : -)
*Adopting a child requires a lot of responsibility, money and education.
* In addition to making and signing lots of legal papers, the adoption is the only way for a couple who can not have children or who want to adopt one, and in which they could consider the child as theirs. (This sentence is not clear... What's the relationship between "signing papers" and "adption as the only way for a couple that cannot have children? I think you need to rethink and rewrite this)
*Nevertheless, adopting a kid can take a lot of time, a lot of money as well as issues of education.
* On the ONE hand
* most of the countries where people are making a process in adopting a child usually give a well result (This sentence sounds a bit like Spanish. You can rewrite: "Adopting children has good results in most countries where this is possible)
* On the other hand, the espousal (adoption???) helps people who ca not have children. (You said this before, is there any reason why you need to repeat it?)
*The advantage is that they feel lonely and want to have a kid for loving him / her. (Is "to feel lonely" an advantage? This is what we can understand here. I think you can rethink it)
* As I said before (instead of "as we talk before", not only because you need a past tense but also because the British don't use "we" when writing articles. They prefer "I")
*The process of getting the papers is higher (?? Do you mean "long", "expensive", "hard"??)
*God makes us love people no matter who we are.
P.S. I think your syntax in English is influenced by German (you are bilingual, aren't you?) but I am sure you can improve your writing if you continue reading, studying and practising. I know you can do it.
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